The metaphor is well done and relates to the topic...please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother! :-)Good job Maria!! :-)
Thank you Sir :)
Another "sacrifice" word.But overall,everything is really splendid.Keep on loving your mother.Don't ever let her down.
Nice!Keep that sun and don't forget to pray for her.
Nice poem! Don't forget to put her name in every single of your prayer. Make her proud! :)
Nice Poem, Love your mom and make her proud
well done :)keep your sun shining, and never make your sun closed by cloud okay :)
Nice, I love this poem :)
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be the good girl who always put smile in your mother's face bene... :)
nice poem :)
The metaphor is well done and relates to the topic...please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother! :-)
ReplyDeleteGood job Maria!! :-)
Thank you Sir :)
DeleteAnother "sacrifice" word.But overall,everything is really splendid.Keep on loving your mother.Don't ever let her down.
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ReplyDeleteKeep that sun and don't forget to pray for her.
Nice poem! Don't forget to put her name in every single of your prayer. Make her proud! :)
ReplyDeleteNice Poem, Love your mom and make her proud
ReplyDeletewell done :)
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Nice, I love this poem :)
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