This is a biography of Veronika
Kunthi Hartati, the science teacher of SMP N 2 Tuntang. She is also the mother
of five beautiful daughters. She was born in Karanganyar on January 25th 1965.
When she was a kid, she had wavy, long, black hair. She is the daughter of Mr.
Soemarno and Mrs. Titi.
She lived with her family in PTP
Batu Jamus in Ngobo village. She has one older sister named Adriana Sinto
Maryati and three younger brothers named Yohanes Herwono Wibisono, Petrus Sutomo
Danardono, and Kristianus Nanang Sadono. Her father was one of the PTP government, people usually called Sinder. Therefore her life
was quite good. People in that place respected her father. She and her family lived in the office house.
Hi Maria
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*She has one older sister name Adriana Sinto Maryati and three younger brothers name Yohanes Herwono Wibisono, Petrus Sutomo Danardono, and Kristianus Nanang Sadono. (check the word "name")
*So her life was quite good. (omit the word "so")
*People in that place were respecting her father. (please check the tense)
thanks Maria :-)
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ReplyDeleteMaria :
ReplyDeleteI guess that it will be better, if you write *She had one older sister and three younger brother. They are ....,...,...,and ... or *She has one older sister, Adriana Sinto Maryati and three younger brothers, ... ,...., and ...
that's all. Gbu :)
thanks a lot reiner for your suggestion :) GBU
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